Sweet Sugar Song

This is the first song I've posted here.

I've written songs before, but I wanted to see what some of you though of this one.

It's a fast, dirty Rn'B shuffle. I can write music, so I can give you any idea of the tune, but think of something that would get your hips in a groove.

Here you go...

Mean Sugar Mama

Chorus-

My Sugar’s a mean lil’ mama.
A bad lil’ baby.
A hard lil’ honey.
With a flirt in her skirt
An’ pert in her shirt
And I don mean maybe
So listen up, Sonny
Sugar’s a mean lil’ mama.

Verse 1

With looks of an angel
With the mind of the devil
I’m tellin’ you boy
Straight on the level.

She’ll shoot you up
And cut you down
So you better run
If she comes aroun’.

Chorus-

Verse 2

If she lays her mojo on you
Ya’ ain’t never gonna forget it
An’ here’s a promise.
Bub, ya’ gonna’ regret it.

You may think I’m lyin’
Playin’ you the fool
But I’m telling you, man
You better live the golden rule.

Bridge-

She’s a mean lil’ mama
A bad lil’ baby
A hard lil’ honey.

Uh-huh
Yeah-hay
Mmm-hmm

She’s a mean lil’ mama
A bad lil’ baby
A hard lil’ honey.

Verse 3

Sweet Sugar’s full of spice
With a hot spray of lead
So listen up, friend
Listen to what I said

Or sure as a red sunrise
Ya’ gonna be deep space dead
With one in the heart
And one in the head.

Chorus-

Outro-

She’s a mean lil’ mama
A bad lil’ baby
A hard lil’ honey.
She’s my Sugar Mama.

Repeat 5 Times.

Well, that's it.